Rockstar Working

Rockstar Working

Markup Review

Website of Egyptian web designer and front-end developer, Ahmad Ali.

The header contains am unnecessary section element to contain the social media links. The content area is split up into separate areas which are ideal for using the section element, but use divs instead.

Remember that the type attribute is no longer required in the link stylesheet element.

7 thoughts on “Rockstar Working

Cramer says
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Overall this design is beautiful and pops out very well to the user.

I don’t think the 2nd ampersand in the first line is unnecessary. “Hi & Welcome! I’m Ahmad Ali. I’m a Freelance…” or “Hi & Welcome! I’m Ahmad Ali, a Freelance…” You see, that works fine. Your intros overuse the ampersand (I see 5 on this screenshot), which people might notice. Try to keep it to 1-2 visible ampersands on one screen.

Otherwise, very attractive, beautiful work, and good wording.

jefhart says
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What are you talking about? Starting two sentences in a row with “I’m” is way worse than using an ampersand. Also, this isn’t a grammar site.

Cramer says
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Have it your way then… five ampersands on your front page and you don’t care. I don’t care if you look silly.

jefhart says
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He has 2, not 5, and the way you suggested sounds bad. “Hi! I’m a designer! I’m a programmer. I’m human.” <– That sounds horrible. The best thing to do would be to use the word "and" instead, not put up a bunch of sentences that start with the same word. Is English not your first language or something?

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  • Patrick Lim says
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    I actually agree. I am just getting started designing a HTML5 and this one works fine if I’m going to look at it. Who cares about the grammar? I’m just here for the code and graphical designs that he used. He’s an Egyptian after all that’s why he may be lacking in speaking English but his website is one of the coolest I’ve ever seen.

    Got something constructive to say?